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You told me how you loved the rain
So now my world's flooded with pain.
I must have been insane
For me to believe, you loved me once again.
I waited on your doorstep
You told me no one else was a threat.
And I listened, although not one of your promises has been kept.
Trading a piece of my heart at a time, until there was nothing left.
Raindrops start to fall again on my face.
Reality slaps me back in my place,
When you easily find a way to replace.
All this time spent with you, turned out to be a waste.
It's like watching storm clouds gather, watching the truth unfold.
Why was I the last one to be told?
You fed me your lies, and I was easily sold.
How is it all the prophets saw, yet never foretold?
I only asked for Honesty, and still you chose to lie.
Maybe it's entertaining for you to watch me die.
You only wanted one thing from me, something deep inside.
So you bit my neck, drinking blood, sucking me dry.
You don't understand the meaning of Honesty;
Or maybe you just don't choose to see.
Maybe you don't recognize Reality:
I hate you as much as you hate me.
So now my world's flooded with pain.
I must have been insane
For me to believe, you loved me once again.
I waited on your doorstep
You told me no one else was a threat.
And I listened, although not one of your promises has been kept.
Trading a piece of my heart at a time, until there was nothing left.
Raindrops start to fall again on my face.
Reality slaps me back in my place,
When you easily find a way to replace.
All this time spent with you, turned out to be a waste.
It's like watching storm clouds gather, watching the truth unfold.
Why was I the last one to be told?
You fed me your lies, and I was easily sold.
How is it all the prophets saw, yet never foretold?
I only asked for Honesty, and still you chose to lie.
Maybe it's entertaining for you to watch me die.
You only wanted one thing from me, something deep inside.
So you bit my neck, drinking blood, sucking me dry.
You don't understand the meaning of Honesty;
Or maybe you just don't choose to see.
Maybe you don't recognize Reality:
I hate you as much as you hate me.
Literature
Razorblade Romance
I hate you,
I slice.
I love you,
I cut twice.
Deeper, deeper,
I have to forget you.
Deeper, deeper,
right on through.
I don't love you,
But, I don't hate you though.
I'm so confused.
I don't fucking know!
So I'll cut myself,
until I figure this out.
I'll cut, I'll scream,
I'll cry, I'll shout...
I hate you with the passion,
I love you to death.
You are worth my blood,
You're not worth my breath.
I'm so confused,
all this over love...
You make me feel like a crow,
but, then I feel like a dove.
So I'll cut until it goes away,
cause I will not love you.
I'll cut until it goes away
cause I don't know what else to do.
I
Literature
short poems
Unheard
My soul trembles as I speak
Pleading for acknowledgement
Strong words, full of meaning
Completely unheard.
Eyes
Gate way to the soul,
So they say,
I dont believe.
People these days
Could care less.
Alone
Awake to the morn with no greeting,
Nor at night not a sweet dream.
Breakfast, nonexistent,
Lunch, mask wearing,
Dinner, listening.
When the day is done
Sleep by thy self;
Only dreams and loneliness to keep company.
Heart
Pieces fall off,
As the years pass by.
Bruises fade,
As time continues.
Scars reopen and close,
When I think of you.
Better this way
Its better this way,
Thats what I
Literature
Solitude
I sit here
by the window,
thinking on our so called 'love'.
And I must
tell you about,
the reality which came to me.
All the times
I wanted you,
you never tried to be around.
You made promises
on many things,
and you broke every single one.
Often you said
you loved me,
except you never truly meant it.
When we loved
I gave myself,
though I know that you didn't.
Now it's over
between us both,
but you could probably care less.
So I sit
scared and lonely,
with only my solitude as comfort.
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the title is actually supposed to be, "The Propets 'Honesty' and 'Reality' " but some of it didn't fit.
i wrote this during science class today, well at least until Mr. D started reading off of my textbook i was using for a clipboard. then i actually started taking notes on lightning.
which might explain the rain/storm lines i put in here.
i wrote this during science class today, well at least until Mr. D started reading off of my textbook i was using for a clipboard. then i actually started taking notes on lightning.
which might explain the rain/storm lines i put in here.
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constructive critisism... don't really have too much
You told me how you loved the rain
So now my world's flooded with pain.
I must have been insane
For me to believe, you loved me once again.
I don't understand how the fact that this person loving the rain has anything to do with your world being flooded with pain. Also the flow in the last two lines isn't perfect but I understand that it's really hard to make poems flow perfectly, so I think that's just fine.
Raindrops start to fall again on my face.
Reality slaps me back in my place,
When you easily find a way to replace.
All this time spent with you, turned out to be a waste.
I don't know whether it's misplaced punctuation or not, but I didn't really understand the last two lines in that stanza... well i understand the last line, the third I didn't.
The rest of the poem is good the way it is... not too much contstructive critisism because this was a nice poem.
You told me how you loved the rain
So now my world's flooded with pain.
I must have been insane
For me to believe, you loved me once again.
I don't understand how the fact that this person loving the rain has anything to do with your world being flooded with pain. Also the flow in the last two lines isn't perfect but I understand that it's really hard to make poems flow perfectly, so I think that's just fine.
Raindrops start to fall again on my face.
Reality slaps me back in my place,
When you easily find a way to replace.
All this time spent with you, turned out to be a waste.
I don't know whether it's misplaced punctuation or not, but I didn't really understand the last two lines in that stanza... well i understand the last line, the third I didn't.
The rest of the poem is good the way it is... not too much contstructive critisism because this was a nice poem.